英文摘要范例1：
The thesis indicatesthe importance of physicalmodel in physics study．It explains the foundationand the features of the physical model in details．And it also emphasizes the importance of the usageof physical model applied in the teaching processin order to achieve the purpose of trainingstudents’quality of scientific thought．
本文指出了物理模型在物理學(xué)習(xí)中的重要作用，詳細(xì)論述了物理模型的建立和特征，強(qiáng)調(diào)需重視物理模型在教學(xué)中的運(yùn)用，以達(dá)到培養(yǎng)
學(xué)生科學(xué)思維品質(zhì)的目的。
這個(gè)摘要乍一看沒問題，其實(shí)句子不多，問題不少。學(xué)術(shù)論文一般講述的是方式、方法或者規(guī)律、思想理論等內(nèi)容，英文描述一概盡量用非人稱主語(yǔ)(non。personal subject)，這恐怕大家
都知道，但是及物動(dòng)詞的主語(yǔ)的選擇，往往是中國(guó)人容易忽視的地方。而以上摘要正是中國(guó)式摘要的典型。
常用于撰寫摘要的英語(yǔ)句型：
2．1．1主題句(Topic sentence)
The purpose of this paper is...·。
The primary goal of this research is...
The intention of this paper is to survey...
The overall objective of this study is...
The emphasis of this study lies in...
This paper aims at providing...
2．1．2論據(jù)(Supporting sentences)
The method used in this paper is known as...
The technique applied is referred to as...
The approach adopted widely is called...
This is a working theory based on the ideathat...
The theory is characterized by...
Included in the experiment were...
This formula is verified by...
The experiment used consisted of...
Experiments were performed to check...
2．1．3結(jié)論(Concluding sentence)
In conclusion，…
It is concluded that...
The results of the experiment indicated that...
The research work has brought about a discovery of...
The research conducted suggests that...
The fruitful work gives the explanation of…
The findings of the research have led to theconclusion that...
了解了以上常用英語(yǔ)句型，我們可以把上
面的摘要改寫為：
The object of this article is to illustrate the importance of physical model in physics study．The foundation and the features of the physical model are exDlained in detail．The emphasis of this study lies in the application of physical model in the teaching process in order to develop students’abilitv to think scientifically．
英文摘要范例2：
This article analyzes the causes and harm of the 0ccupational boredom of college teachers．Here are three solutions：One is to encourage col’lege teaehers to participate and decide．The see‘ond is to show impartiality among college teach。ers．The last one is to free college teachers fromthe pressures of work．
文章分析了高校教師職業(yè)倦怠這一現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因和造成的危害，論述了解決教師職業(yè)倦怠可通過提高教師的決策參與度、提升教師的公平感、緩解教師的工作壓力等三種方式加以解決。
摘要2顯然比摘要1好些，但首句仍然值得商榷。試將摘要2改寫如下：
The article aims at analyzing the causes andharm of the occupational boredom among collegeteachers．Here are three solutions：One is to encourage college teachers to participate and decide·The second is to show impartiality among college teachers．The last is to free college teachers from the pressures of work．